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		<title>Comment on Notes by Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 03:20:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Apparently, I have been sucked into a very random game of blog tag, and so I have decided to have you come along too!  See the question I have asked you at http://wp.me/p2niio-4I</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Apparently, I have been sucked into a very random game of blog tag, and so I have decided to have you come along too!  See the question I have asked you at <a href="http://wp.me/p2niio-4I" rel="nofollow">http://wp.me/p2niio-4I</a><br />
<span class="cluv">Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen recently posted..<a class="f227857b6a 19062" href="http://justanotherrabidreader.info/index.php/2012/04/19/excerpt-and-giveaway-sex-drugs-and-psychiatric-wards-by-eve-lopez/">Excerpt and Giveaway~ Sex, Drugs and Psychiatric Wards by Eve Lopez</a><span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip u 19062" alt="My Profile" style="border:0" width="16" height="14" src="http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p>
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		<title>Comment on Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) &#8211; PLUS a Giveaway by Sara Ramsey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sara Ramsey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 18:04:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Lisa - I&#039;m so sorry for not responding to your comment sooner. I was out of town off and on for the past three weeks and, admittedly, forgot to check comments :(

Writing dialogue is so tricky. I&#039;ve found that when I&#039;m struggling with the dialogue, it&#039;s often because I don&#039;t know the characters well enough - if they&#039;re still strangers to me, it&#039;s impossible to write something that sounds &#039;real&#039;. When I&#039;m first starting a book, I end up writing pages and pages (or chapters and chapters) that I cut for the next draft, but those introductory pages help me find the characters so that the rest of the book is stronger. I&#039;d suggest doing some character development exercises first, just to make sure you know how your characters would react - as you write them, you may find their voices!

I hope that helps - and you can always email me at dearsara AT sararamsey DOT com if you want to chat more about this :) Thanks for stopping by!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lisa &#8211; I&#8217;m so sorry for not responding to your comment sooner. I was out of town off and on for the past three weeks and, admittedly, forgot to check comments <img src='http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':(' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Writing dialogue is so tricky. I&#8217;ve found that when I&#8217;m struggling with the dialogue, it&#8217;s often because I don&#8217;t know the characters well enough &#8211; if they&#8217;re still strangers to me, it&#8217;s impossible to write something that sounds &#8216;real&#8217;. When I&#8217;m first starting a book, I end up writing pages and pages (or chapters and chapters) that I cut for the next draft, but those introductory pages help me find the characters so that the rest of the book is stronger. I&#8217;d suggest doing some character development exercises first, just to make sure you know how your characters would react &#8211; as you write them, you may find their voices!</p>
<p>I hope that helps &#8211; and you can always email me at dearsara AT sararamsey DOT com if you want to chat more about this <img src='http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Thanks for stopping by!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Just a &#8216;Taste&#8217; of Something Great by Trailer and Excerpt Reveal for Taste by Kate Evangelista &#124; Just Another Rabid Reader</title>
		<link>http://bibliophilesretreat.com/2012/04/16/just-a-taste-of-something-great/comment-page-1/#comment-18939</link>
		<dc:creator>Trailer and Excerpt Reveal for Taste by Kate Evangelista &#124; Just Another Rabid Reader</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Apr 2012 12:03:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] There will also be other contact at my friend, Melissa&#8217;s blog at the Bibliophile&#8217;s Retreat [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] There will also be other contact at my friend, Melissa&#8217;s blog at the Bibliophile&#8217;s Retreat [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Illusion by Frank Peretti &#8211; Giveaway by Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</title>
		<link>http://bibliophilesretreat.com/2012/03/19/illusion-by-frank-peretti-giveaway/comment-page-1/#comment-18670</link>
		<dc:creator>Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Apr 2012 04:11:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>okay, today I tweeted, facebooked, and posted it to Reddit.  Username for all is the same!  Destinyisntfree</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>okay, today I tweeted, facebooked, and posted it to Reddit.  Username for all is the same!  Destinyisntfree<br />
<span class="cluv">Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen recently posted..<a class="a770dce5ef 18670" href="http://justanotherrabidreader.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/review-the-trouble-with-perfect-by-christy-barritt/">Review – The Trouble With Perfect by Christy Barritt</a><span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip u 18670" alt="My Profile" style="border:0" width="16" height="14" src="http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p>
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		<title>Comment on Illusion by Frank Peretti &#8211; Giveaway by Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Mar 2012 06:24:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I tweeted, FB&#039;ed and blogged about this also!

Twitter:  Destinyisntfree

FB:  Destinyisntfree

Blog is the website!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I tweeted, FB&#8217;ed and blogged about this also!</p>
<p>Twitter:  Destinyisntfree</p>
<p>FB:  Destinyisntfree</p>
<p>Blog is the website!<br />
<span class="cluv">Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen recently posted..<a class="f6775d1fe9 18637" href="http://destinyisntfree.wordpress.com/2012/03/31/illusion-by-frank-peretti-giveaway/">Illusion by Frank Peretti – Giveaway</a><span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip u 18637" alt="My Profile" style="border:0" width="16" height="14" src="http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p>
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		<title>Comment on Illusion by Frank Peretti &#8211; Giveaway by Illusion by Frank Peretti – Giveaway &#171; destinyisntfree</title>
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		<dc:creator>Illusion by Frank Peretti – Giveaway &#171; destinyisntfree</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Mar 2012 06:02:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Illusion by Frank Peretti – Giveaway. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this post. [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) &#8211; PLUS a Giveaway by Geralyn Beauchamp</title>
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		<dc:creator>Geralyn Beauchamp</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Mar 2012 05:56:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hurray a give away!  Sounds like a great read!  I do love a good regency!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hurray a give away!  Sounds like a great read!  I do love a good regency!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) &#8211; PLUS a Giveaway by Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &#38; Written/ing) – PLUS a Giveaway &#171; destinyisntfree</title>
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		<dc:creator>Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &#38; Written/ing) – PLUS a Giveaway &#171; destinyisntfree</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Mar 2012 05:54:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] to a good friends blog.  Check it out.  She is giving away a copy of the author&#8217;s book!   Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) – PLUS a Giveaway. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] to a good friends blog.  Check it out.  She is giving away a copy of the author&#8217;s book!   Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) – PLUS a Giveaway. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fun Facts About Sara Ramsey and Books (Read &amp; Written/ing) &#8211; PLUS a Giveaway by Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 20:34:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I want to thank you for introducing me to another seemingly great author that I would never have found on my own.  I was never really a fan of romance novels, but as I am getting older, I am starting to see the appeal, especially when there is such a great story behind it!  I do have a question for Sara, if she happens to read this.  As an aspiring author myself, I struggle with writing dialogue.  Any tips to get that process rolling more smoothly?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I want to thank you for introducing me to another seemingly great author that I would never have found on my own.  I was never really a fan of romance novels, but as I am getting older, I am starting to see the appeal, especially when there is such a great story behind it!  I do have a question for Sara, if she happens to read this.  As an aspiring author myself, I struggle with writing dialogue.  Any tips to get that process rolling more smoothly?<br />
<span class="cluv">Lisa LaVergne-Pottgen recently posted..<a class="ea466077a2 18629" href="http://justanotherrabidreader.wordpress.com/2012/03/29/same-life-new-story-change-your-perspective-to-change-your-life-by-jan-silvious/">Same Life, New Story: Change Your Perspective to Change Your Life by Jan Silvious</a><span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip u 18629" alt="My Profile" style="border:0" width="16" height="14" src="http://bibliophilesretreat.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p>
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		<title>Comment on Illusion by Frank Peretti &#8211; Giveaway by Anita Yancey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anita Yancey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 13:13:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I tweeted about the giveaway.
Twitter Name: @Anita Yancey</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I tweeted about the giveaway.<br />
Twitter Name: @Anita Yancey</p>
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